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Even though super short its done well. Graphics nice, atmosphere is good Story is sad and depressing and i wish it was longer as I think it had more story that could of been told to lead up to the final part. Apart from that good job!
Thank you for playing the game, it seems you have picked up an older build. We recommend trying the latest build for most clean and more bug free experience. Thanks again. :D
Wow... this got to me... I'm extremely bummed that it wasn't longer... Damn... I would really like to see more like this. You guys are great, keep it up!
How is this even a jam game? The graphics and post processing make it look like a big studio made it. I really see potential in this studio! I am excited for the next game y'all will make.
Pros and cons are down below) Check out the game here (the game is the 1st there):
Advantages:
1. A very unexpected plot twist at the end! I think it's very cool how the story was unraveled through the details in the environment.
2. The game had voice acting! I think that's pretty awesome. Moreover, voice acting was good and believable - adore that!
Disadvantages:
1. Maybe it would be cool if the player would have more opportunities to investigate environment - open different doors, walk around, etc. I guess right now the player seems to be pretty powerless going through such a short experience.
2. Also, I think the game would benefit a lot from having different endings. For example, the first ending would be the same but then the player'd get the ability to change something and then you get a good end.
3. I wish the game would have more horror elements! The one at the roof was pretty potent, but it didn't feel like enough. The game is so short :( I want more ahah
Overall:
Wonderful experience! I'd rate it 4/5 because I think it can be further improved. The simplest ways to improve a short game - add significant to the story details (the devil is in the details :)) or more endings (it does not have to be fully animated ending - you could add a different epilogue and the game would instantly become interesting to replay)
Hey, thank you for playing, we enjoyed your playthrough!
Thank you so much for elaborate feedback, we'll make sure to put it to good use.
We had planned to make the game slightly lengthy but because it's our first game, we kept it concise enough so that we can complete it and gain enough confidence to make another game.
We didn't have scope for multiple endings as given the ending - Nikki realises that she has been dead all this time and she was roaming around in her own house as a spirit, which is why she couldn't open doors or such, only comment about things. It was very much a planned linear experience from the get go.
But your suggestions about alternate possibilities are great and we'll make sure to implement these ideas in our future projects. Thank you :)
For a short game there was a lot of story plugged in and I really appreciated the effort put in. Like others said I was stunned by the ending and it was such a note to end on. If you wanted to watch the playthrough it's here in this video!
Pretty spooky and pretty sad game. This game shows the sad reality that some people face. I was left at a loss for words, great storytelling by the game creator. I included this game in a video that I will link below if you are interested in seeing my reaction. Gameplay starts at the beginning.
Pretty good. This is the most unique jumpscare ever. I'm not sure I understand the "ghost/monster" itself. What haunts her? Is it her guilt? The memory of what she did?
But I love the concept. As well as the items you can interact with so you can care about her more.
Pretty good. Well made and creepy. I had some weird stuff with the sound (intro music is real loud compared to in-game sound was very quiet). But that could have been a problem on my end. Fixed it pretty well with editing so it's not in the video.
Ending is a little odd because it almost seems to approve of her perspective but your comments clearly show that was not the intent. And it makes more sense after the fact.
Have you considered putting some text after the game is over that could clarify the purpose and maybe provide some resources for people needing help?
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Ein sehr interessantes, kurzes Spiel. Das Ende war für mich vorher so nicht abzusehen, wirklich gut gemacht Freunde! 4/5
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graphics: very good
movement: smooth
story: A++ just like her grades/skills in art.
teared up a little bit ngl, felt represented here. nice game, i would love to see more of your work, gang.
Even though super short its done well. Graphics nice, atmosphere is good Story is sad and depressing and i wish it was longer as I think it had more story that could of been told to lead up to the final part. Apart from that good job!
nice graphics
Beautiful graphics, eerie atmosphere..loved your game!! The story was really sad :(
Nice, short little game with a pleasing visual style. Good stuff!
Game was great, i was really impressed, here is my gameplay:
Thank you so much for playing the game. We really loved your playthrough, it was really entertaining!
Happy to hear that <3 Can't wait for more games from your studio, good luck with more project <3
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Thank you for playing the game, it seems you have picked up an older build. We recommend trying the latest build for most clean and more bug free experience. Thanks again. :D
this Game is hard, the Story in the Background can hurts, suizid in Young Lif Years
Nice game
Thank you for trying out the game! We really enjoyed your playthrough and commentary. :)
Wtf did I just play...
Nice little game but definitely surprised me
Well made game!
Creepy! Graphics were awesome and felt really high budget!
Great for a Halloween Special Livestream!
What a Twist!!!
This got me with the scares and really impacted me with the ending! Love the graphics and design! Your game is at 3:15!
Wow... this got to me... I'm extremely bummed that it wasn't longer... Damn... I would really like to see more like this. You guys are great, keep it up!
How is this even a jam game? The graphics and post processing make it look like a big studio made it. I really see potential in this studio! I am excited for the next game y'all will make.
Thank you so much ^.^
We're all rookies who have worked here and there and now trying to make something together. We're really happy you liked it.
what's the minimum specs for thw game?
Hey this was a nice game. Very sad also
Fun little game!
Link to my channel (opens in new tab) youtube.com/jonathick
This game ACTUALLY gave me the chiils! This is definitely a good game and i recommend it ahahha!
Pros and cons are down below) Check out the game here (the game is the 1st there):
Advantages:
1. A very unexpected plot twist at the end! I think it's very cool how the story was unraveled through the details in the environment.
2. The game had voice acting! I think that's pretty awesome. Moreover, voice acting was good and believable - adore that!
Disadvantages:
1. Maybe it would be cool if the player would have more opportunities to investigate environment - open different doors, walk around, etc. I guess right now the player seems to be pretty powerless going through such a short experience.
2. Also, I think the game would benefit a lot from having different endings. For example, the first ending would be the same but then the player'd get the ability to change something and then you get a good end.
3. I wish the game would have more horror elements! The one at the roof was pretty potent, but it didn't feel like enough. The game is so short :( I want more ahah
Overall:
Wonderful experience! I'd rate it 4/5 because I think it can be further improved. The simplest ways to improve a short game - add significant to the story details (the devil is in the details :)) or more endings (it does not have to be fully animated ending - you could add a different epilogue and the game would instantly become interesting to replay)
Hope my feedback was useful!
Hey, thank you for playing, we enjoyed your playthrough!
Thank you so much for elaborate feedback, we'll make sure to put it to good use.
We had planned to make the game slightly lengthy but because it's our first game, we kept it concise enough so that we can complete it and gain enough confidence to make another game.
We didn't have scope for multiple endings as given the ending - Nikki realises that she has been dead all this time and she was roaming around in her own house as a spirit, which is why she couldn't open doors or such, only comment about things. It was very much a planned linear experience from the get go.
But your suggestions about alternate possibilities are great and we'll make sure to implement these ideas in our future projects. Thank you :)
Creepy vibe! Nice job! And the ending got to me 😱 very dark though, was struggling to see 🤣🤣
I played this game on the latest episode of my 'Quick Scares' series on my YouTube channel! Check it out below! 😃👻
My article about your game got published. Good job on the game. Loved it. BTW, I'm the same guy from r/indiangamersriseup.
Thank you so much for the heads up, we really appreciate it. :)
Scary and Creepy game. Really like the voice overs in this game. Nice graphics and a little story. Very well made! :)
https://youtu.be/E4l1UmgzX2w
today is a scary game day, i love your enviroment deisgn
Thank you so much ^.^
your welcom, can you rate my game aswell https://mehrdadsh.itch.io/eli-was-sad
For a short game there was a lot of story plugged in and I really appreciated the effort put in. Like others said I was stunned by the ending and it was such a note to end on. If you wanted to watch the playthrough it's here in this video!
Pretty spooky and pretty sad game. This game shows the sad reality that some people face. I was left at a loss for words, great storytelling by the game creator. I included this game in a video that I will link below if you are interested in seeing my reaction. Gameplay starts at the beginning.
Pretty good. This is the most unique jumpscare ever. I'm not sure I understand the "ghost/monster" itself. What haunts her? Is it her guilt? The memory of what she did?
But I love the concept. As well as the items you can interact with so you can care about her more.
Pretty good. Well made and creepy. I had some weird stuff with the sound (intro music is real loud compared to in-game sound was very quiet). But that could have been a problem on my end. Fixed it pretty well with editing so it's not in the video.
Ending is a little odd because it almost seems to approve of her perspective but your comments clearly show that was not the intent. And it makes more sense after the fact.
Have you considered putting some text after the game is over that could clarify the purpose and maybe provide some resources for people needing help?
I have to be friends with ghosts
Great game here is my video of it! :D